I twisted the prompt a tiny bit and wrote a nonfiction piece about my life as a seven year old. I will admit ahead of time, nonfiction is NOT my best attribute, but I do love having a challenge. :)
I sat in a field of enchanting dreams; soaring grasses from Jack and the Beanstalk to lost buttons from a bear named Corduroy. The sunlight bounced off my skin, creating a blanket of everlasting warmth. I was seven; a child of nature’s imagination. Poetic stanzas grew tall within my mind as if it were Wordsworth himself whispering words of wisdom to me.
I formed a devotion to nature, to life, and to imagination. Rocks were painted with colors of uncertainty and created with a personal canvas that told stories of Indian tribes. Leafs were also sacred in my world. I wanted to savor the veins that once seeped water pellets through the spine of the tree. I pressed each leaf into a journal and kept the memory alive.
Kickball was my sport of choice. Pushing each muscle that formed between my thigh and leg, I made sure the ball was nowhere in sight. The grasses of the field scratched the surface of my legs each time the ball rolled towards my position. I would come home with marks of love from the grasses embracing my legs.
The field of dreams also carried a night life of music. I waltzed with the sounds of crickets and katydids that were speaking a fresh language of affection. The stars of the night told stories of souls that found peace in another life. I felt home; safe in the arms of the tall grasses and the faraway music of the night. I go there in my dreams, remembering each delicate detail that encouraged me to write and imagine.
6 comments:
Wonderful writing. I love writing as a child, and I can tell that you had a fun childhood. Great job on the prompt!
Gorgeous writing, really fired the images in my mind!
very nice write. very delicate... just like the storyline.
This is a gorgeous piece and really solid, easy-to-read writing. I think you've done a wonderful job of describing your general life as a child through the day and night of this field of dreams.
Don't shy away from writing non-fiction - you do a great job of it, contrary to what you may think. :) Your rich descriptions and character perspectives [as we see in your fiction] work equally well in reality worlds too. :)
@Claire - Thank you! I was one of those children that was constantly daydreaming.
@Lisa - Glad you could picture the images in your mind!
&Danneromero - Glad you enjoyed reading it. :)
@Melinda - Thank you so much! You gave me a confidence boost. I will now start to write more non-fiction pieces. :)
A wonderful assortment of imagery here, enjoyed the language used to describe each part.
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