What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.
This week: SHIVER
I was lying in a pool of murky water that was once pure and delicate. Dirt and blood escaped from my body and continued to fill the beach with death. The bullet wound I had was no longer throbbing inside of my bones. It was now a numbing sensation, a shudder that filled every vein in my declining figure. I was cool to the touch, but my insides were sweltering.
4 comments:
Very vivid. I like it :)
Such an unexpected result though the mystery and curiosity it created worked well.
Intense,- now I really want this person to pull through :) Well done Stephanie!
That was very powerful, and I would like to know more! Great imagery here.
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